This is the feedback I was given for my front cover, contents page and double page spread. I asked the two people from my focus group and got mainly positive feedback from everyone as a whole. There was a couple negative feedback but the comments that are negative, I will try to make improvements in order to take the criticism and make my music magazine better. From this feedback I can tell that I need to add more information on my front cover and move around some of the sell lines. For my contents page I will be adding an editors note to fill up space and add a comment to make it look like a real contents page. From this feedback I know that I will need to improve my double page spread quite a bit and adding more colour to it.
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